Input Needed

This is a sketch I’m playing around with to conceptualize “revenge”.  It’s still about the cadet and still set in the retro-future, but he’s taking on more of a secret agent angle now, thanks to Rebecca Bradley for making me realize that I have a thing for spy clichés.

Some input I’ve already received:

1. Possibly show some faces to make it a little more dynamic.

2. The exaggerated perspective with the hands makes things look weird. Specifically, Cody said it looks like he’s about to shoot a baby.

Also, should I keep using the Nintendo zapper or is that just making things too ridiculous?  Click through to comment.